17A - Elevator Pitch No.2
Elevator Pitch
The Pitch : https://youtu.be/bA9JDv6dnBo
Reflection/ Changes : I think what stood out to me as important was capturing the audience's attention with a good start and a great ending. Therefore before starting this new elevation pitch, I tried to really capture the attention of the audience unlike my first time. Most of the feedback I received were positive but I got some great ideas that I could add to my product such as an anti fog product. I tried to be more creative and extensive in describing my product this time around. I also tried to be more organized so I covered all the topics that I felt were important.
The Pitch : https://youtu.be/bA9JDv6dnBo
Reflection/ Changes : I think what stood out to me as important was capturing the audience's attention with a good start and a great ending. Therefore before starting this new elevation pitch, I tried to really capture the attention of the audience unlike my first time. Most of the feedback I received were positive but I got some great ideas that I could add to my product such as an anti fog product. I tried to be more creative and extensive in describing my product this time around. I also tried to be more organized so I covered all the topics that I felt were important.
Hi Jess,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy your business opportunity. I think it’s such a great product and you did a great job directly addressing your audience by including Gainesville residents and students specifically. The safety consideration in this product is also really appealing to an even wider audience because everyone wants to feel safe in their vehicle. Great job on this assignment!
Hi Jess,
ReplyDeleteGreat elevator pitch. I loved learning a little bit more about your business opportunity. I think its great that you are focusing on your target audience- Gainesville residents by mentioning rainesville. I like that your product appeals to safety needs so it may come to be a necessity rather than just a luxury to consumers. You did a great job at describing your product and showing your confidence.